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Dear Sir or Madam:

Your advertisement for a Management Trainee on the Internet interested me because the position that you described is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.

My name is Carrie. I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are international law, Marketing, International Trade, and Financial management. I know your company is a large multinational enterprise, and this job can give me plentiful experience. I will be honored to be a member of your company.

Enclosed is a copy of my resume, in which is more fully details of my qualifications for the position.

Thank you for reading. I look forward to receiving your return information.

Sincerely yours,

Carrie Zhou

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Resume:

Carrie Zhou
Room 1006, No.3 Building,
#1050 Zhangyang Road,
Shanghai, China, 200122
Phone: (021)68766321
Email: carrie_zhou@126.com

Objective
Seeking a position in a large multinational company.

Summary of Qualifications
Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: Speaking, Reading, Writing
Interpersonal Communication Skills
High Responsibility
CET-6
Computer Literate: Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office, Foxpro, Internet Research, HTML design, ERP

Education
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Jia Ding district, SH Shanghai University
Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade. Anticipated May, 2005

Relevant Coursework
ERP(Enterprise of Resource Plan) course, Present
CET-6 course, 2003

Experience
Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD
Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002.
 

Steven D

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carrie_zhou said:
Dear Sir or Madam:

Your advertisement for a Management Trainee on the Internet interested me because the position that you described is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.

My name is Carrie. I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are international law, Marketing, International Trade, and Financial management. I know your company is a large multinational enterprise, and this job can give me plentiful experience. I will be honored to be a member of your company.

Enclosed is a copy of my resume, in which is more fully details of my qualifications for the position.

Thank you for reading. I look forward to receiving your return information.

Sincerely yours,

Carrie Zhou

Enclosed


Resume:

Carrie Zhou
Room 1006, No.3 Building,
#1050 Zhangyang Road,
Shanghai, China, 200122
Phone: (021)68766321
Email: carrie_zhou@126.com

Objective
Seeking a position in a large multinational company.

Summary of Qualifications
Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: Speaking, Reading, Writing
Interpersonal Communication Skills
High Responsibility
CET-6
Computer Literate: Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office, Foxpro, Internet Research, HTML design, ERP

Education
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Jia Ding district, SH Shanghai University
Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade. Anticipated May, 2005

Relevant Coursework
ERP(Enterprise of Resource Plan) course, Present
CET-6 course, 2003

Experience
Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD
Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002.

I think it's better to place "course work" under the category of "Education".

Also, I think it's better to place "Experience" immediately after the "Summary of Qualifications".
 

Steven D

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Experience
Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD
Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002. <<<<

What else can you say about your experience at these places? I would include more information here.
 

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exactly like the kind of job

I don't like this phrase-I'd say 'exactly the job'.;-)
 
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