my cover letter and resume

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RETURN ADDRESS: fiona00002003@sohu.com
Or fiona00002003@yahoo.com



DATE: OCT 19th 2004

PERSON/COMPANY TELEPHONE: 13391203899
OR 021-56964127



RE: POSSIBLE EMPLOYMENT



Dear the manager of Bowne Global Solutions (china):
email:personnel@bowneglobal.com.cn



> RESUME
> >
> > PERSONALDATA
> > My first name is FIONA.
> > Address: Sydney instution of language and commance Shanghai University
> > Birthday:June 29th 1984
> > Sex: female
> > Height:164cm
> > Weight: 102g
>
> > EDUCATION
> > I¡¯m the undergraduate of Shanghai University, and my major is international trade. During 2003, I passed CET4 above 70, furthermore. I got the permission of ERP about financial management professional.In the meanwhile, I have finished the course of ERP about supply chain management professional.I am preparing IELTS nowadays in order to exam my capacity in English.
> >
> > WORK EXPERIENCE
> > From June to July in 2004, I got practical training in Shanghai qiangsheng group. In that period of time, I did the good job in taxi and communication management, and I got the good performance evalution from the leaders in the corporation.
> >
> > INTRESTEDFIELD
> > I prefer some challenge in work. In other words, I do the fundamentals to soar my capability to react to emengency.
> >
> > I appreciate to your company if I would have the time to be your interviewee.

Fiona
OCT 19th 2004
 

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Dear the manager of Bowne Global Solutions (china):



This start would see the letter get thrown away in all probaility. Use a name, not a title and please check for very elementary errors like china- surely it would China. ;-)
 
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