[Grammar] My dear Tim, this whole thing about Kevin

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"My dear Tim, this whole thing about Kevin is a big opportunity for us. You love the seventh art, and after reviewing the video I believe we could achieve a perfect shot."

Thanks.

 

[GoesStation]

Yes. I don't understand what a perfect shot is supposed to mean though. It sounds like something in the video convinced the writer they could create an ideal filming sequence.

 

[emsr2d2]

And I have no idea what the seventh art is.

 

[GoesStation]

"The seventh art" is the cinema. In French culture, it's a very common term. Anglophone cineastes are probably familiar with it but it would be lost on a wider audience.

 

[Nikitus]

First of all, thanks for your help.

Sorry for the confusion.

Yes. I don't understand what a perfect shot is supposed to mean though. It sounds like something in the video convinced the writer they could create an ideal filming sequence.

Yes, that was what I tried to write.

Seventh Art: Some people call cinema the seventh art.

Thanks.

 

[teechar]

after reviewing the video, I believe we could achieve a perfect shot."

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