My final correcpondence with a third grader

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HaraKiriBlade

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Pulling an April Fool's joke on me, eh? nice one! Yes, my school ends on April 11, although I got 5 final exams to write afterwards.
Man, as you said, food is good in Korea. That's one of the main reasons I'm going there this summer. I'll have to double my exercise though, otherwise my belly will get so big that it will start hanging like that of a pregnant woman. Now that can't be good, can it?
Did you have fun at the agricultural museum? do you like animals? I like them only if they are... food. When I see cows, I see beef. When I see pigs, I see pork. So I don't like animals I can't eat, like cats, dogs or hamsters. How about you?
It seems that this will be the last page of your journal I'll be writing on. You did a good job keeping up with this, and I'm very proud of you. I guess I'll see you at your school on Thursday, eh?

Could you check the grammar in this writing, please?

- HKB
 

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although I got 5 final exams to write afterwards.- I'd use 'have got'
Man, as you said, food is good in Korea. - I'd use 'the food' (= Korean cuisine)
I'll have to double my exercise though- exercisroutine (or something similar)
do you like animals? I like them only if they are... food. (capital letter)
;-)
 
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