Need help on revising and editing please!

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lexyjulianne

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Everyone has a different attitude depending on there mood. When one is young, one has different attitudes towards what they have now, of course. We obviously learn to view things in our own way when we are older. When someone is pleasant to me, I will be polite back. When someone is rude to me, I will be rude back. If they are not going to respect me, I will surely not respect them.
Attitudes come from your environment as well as someone who raises one. My mom knows best how to treat someone and what attitude someone should have. She raised me, so of course I know how to be towards others and things. I feel that your attitude is the most valuable things about a person.
Attitudes and values are what guide us throughout life. It even influences learning, people who are positive about learning like school because of their attitude. Measuring this is a difficult task, the existence is introduced by a persons words and behaviors.
For example, when it comes to writing, I am terribly negative about it. I do not feel confident when I have to write about a subject. Like the one, I'm writing right now. My attitude is not positive, at all, about writing. I do not like it much, but I do hope to get better at it. I do have a long way to go, but I will get there, sooner or later.
 

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Everyone has a different attitude depending on there mood. When one is young, one has different attitudes towards what they have now, of course. We obviously learn to view things in our own way when we are older. When someone is pleasant to me, I will be polite back. When someone is rude to me, I will be rude back. If they are not going to respect me, I will surely not respect them.
Attitudes come from your environment as well as someone who raises one. My mom knows best how to treat someone and what attitude someone should have. She raised me, so of course I know how to be towards others and things. I feel that your attitude is the most valuable things about a person.
Attitudes and values are what guide us throughout life. It even influences learning, people who are positive about learning like school because of their attitude. Measuring this is a difficult task, the existence is introduced by a persons words and behaviors.
For example, when it comes to writing, I am terribly negative about it. I do not feel confident when I have to write about a subject. Like the one, I'm writing right now. My attitude is not positive, at all, about writing. I do not like it much, but I do hope to get better at it. I do have a long way to go, but I will get there, sooner or later.

Welcome to the forums, lexyjulianne. Is this homework?
 
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