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[eput84]

How to improve my English…?This is the question that makes me worried all times right now. I’ve tried a lot of methods and approaches to improve my English. It makes my head sick..of course give me headache..From surfing to the English learning website, try to listen to the English conversation, record other people speeches and conversations, and also record my own voice..Every morning, I read the newspaper (New Straits Times) that send to my office but it still not help much in my English..I don’t know why..Most probably my head or more specific my memory (get slowly full---cannot remember too much things anymore..)
Even though this is my hard time, I guess..but I never ever stop my efforts to be a good person in speaking, reading, and communicate as well in English..Just now, I found a good English learning website, I think..UsingEnglish.com...but I just made a rough observation on that.. I think and hope as well, it could help me a lot in English..by the way before I end my word, regarding to Benazir Bhutto death, I want to express my sympathy and condolence to her family..may her soul rest in peace..Hope that the killer a.k.a commit suicide bomber will throw out to the hell!!don’t get me wrong..i’m not a person who always pray a bad luck to the people..just hate with the act..killing people with the bomb..That was a stupid act from coward people…
p/s—can somebody check and evaluate my non formal essay above..thank u..=>

 

[RonBee]

A few comments and suggestions.

How can I improve my English?
This is the question that makes me worried all the time right now. I've tried a lot of methods and approaches to improving my English. (Thinking so hard gives me a headache.) I've tried surfing English learning websites, listening to English conversations, recording other people's speeches and conversations and also recording my own voice. Every morning I read the newspaper (New Straits Times) that is sent to my office, but it does not help me much with learning English. I don' know why. Most probably my head is so crammed full of information it can't get any more in it. I cannot remember very much anymore. Maybe that is it.

Even though this is my hard time I will never stop in my efforts to become good at using the English language. Just now, I found a good English learning website, I think--UsingEnglish.com.

I know it's changing the subject, but I have a few words to say about Benazir Bhutto's tragic death. May the person who killed her rot in hell! I know that's intemperate, but I hate cowardly people who do cowardly, hateful things. (The world would be better off without people like that.) My deepest sympathy to her family and friends. I wish them well during this time of trouble.

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How did I do?

 

[eput84]

Hi Ronbee..

It was a perfect essay, i think..(plz correct me if i'm wrong)

 

[RonBee]

Hi Ronbee..

It was a perfect essay, i think..(plz correct me if i'm wrong)

Well, it is now.
;-)

 

[rmsh16]

good one !!