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Hi there,
please proofread the following sentences:

John tried hard to train his agility in the hope to win the obstacle races.

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John tried hard to develop his agility in the hope of winning the obstacle race.

Even though he would enter many races, you are referring to the event, the obstacle race, so 'races' is in the singular
 
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