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bosun

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Can I have your comments on the following setences?( It is for a statement for college admission)

1. I have heard that your school offers excellent courses on IT subjects and I think If I study at your school, I will be given a good opprotunity for a better career.

2. SInce I got information about your school, I have prepared a lot. I have stuied both English and IT very hard.
 

Anglika

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Can I have your comments on the following sentences?( It is for a statement for college admission)

1. I have heard that your school offers excellent courses in IT subjects and I think that if I [could/was able to] study at your school, I will have a good chance for a better career.

2. SInce I received information about your school, I have prepared a lot. I have studied both English and IT very hard.
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