bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Can I have your comments on the following setences?( It is for a statement for college admission)
1. I have heard that your school offers excellent courses on IT subjects and I think If I study at your school, I will be given a good opprotunity for a better career.
2. SInce I got information about your school, I have prepared a lot. I have stuied both English and IT very hard.
1. I have heard that your school offers excellent courses on IT subjects and I think If I study at your school, I will be given a good opprotunity for a better career.
2. SInce I got information about your school, I have prepared a lot. I have stuied both English and IT very hard.