One more correction please

[Zoe2008]

We have 300pcs RTV goods stored in your transportation’s warehouse during the CNY
holidays. We would like to collect them in these two days. Could you please advice your
transporter and confirm us the time ASAP.

 

[susiedqq]

We have 300pcs RTV goods stored in your transportation’s warehouse during the CNY
holidays.

Are they there now? If so, then it would be "We have had 300 pcs. of RTV good stored in your transportion warehouse over the CNY holidays."


We would like to collect them in these two days.
Do you want to pick them up before two days pass? Say: "We would like to pick them up within two days."

Could you please advice your transporter and confirm us the time ASAP.
Do you want to pick up the items OR is the transporter going to do that?

Say: Please notify the transporter and confirm when we can pick up the goods, by calling ___________________

or Please notify the transporter company when they can pick up the goods.

 

[Anglika]

We have 300pcs RTV goods stored in your transportation’s warehouse during the CNY
holidays. We would like to collect them in these two days. Could you please advice your
transporter and confirm us the time ASAP.

During the CNY holiday, we have had 300 pcs RTV stored in your warehouse. We would like to collect these in the next two days. Please advise your transport company of this and confirm to us the time of collection ASAP.