One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

[newkeenlearner]

Would you mind checking this sentence?

One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it can be used while you do your usual deeds so that it really doesn't take extra time.


Source: http://www.emedexpert.com/tips/music.shtml

 

[Tdol]

Deeds???

 

[newkeenlearner]

Deeds???

How about "work" or "jobs" ? This word "deeds" sounds weired to me too.

 

[emsr2d2]

How about "work" or "jobs"? [STRIKE]This[/STRIKE] The word "deeds" sounds [STRIKE]weired[/STRIKE] weird to me too.

What sort of things did you mean by "usual deeds"? That will help us choose the appropriate term.

 

[Raymott]

chores

 

[newkeenlearner]

One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it can be used while you do your jobs or chores so that it really doesn't take extra time.

 

[Rover_KE]

End the sentence at 'chores'. What follows makes no sense.

 

[emsr2d2]

I would use "you can listen" rather than "it can be used".

One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that you can listen while you do your chores.