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RonBee

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Our Love

Our love is like the winter snows, the greening of springtime, the summer's heat, the contrasting colors of fall. Within our love live all the seasons.

No matter what tomorrow brings--the future's not ours to see--I hope that you'll remember me as somebody who loved you for all the best of reasons.

:)

02-09-1995
 

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Gee, thanks! :D

(Watch this space for more.)

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Swim Me

Swim Me

Listen to
The motion of the ocean,
The rhythms of the sea.
Experience the harmony
Of a world inhabited only
By you
And by me.

Swim me. Flowingly, rowingly, swim me.
Sing me
Songs of love.
Knead life into my limbs:
Warm, warm medicine for the soul.

Swim me. Flowingly, rowingly, swim me.
(You are the moon and I am the sea.)
I float with the tides:
In and out,
Up, down,
And all around.

I move to music
Heard only by you and me:
The motion of the ocean,
The rhythms of the sea.
Touch me. Hold me. Knead me. Mold me.
Swim me.

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Ron, this is my first time visiting you guys' poems. WOW, you are fantastic!
And Beeuurkes and sanny, you are great!
<clapping>


I can't think of any off the top of my head,
I guess there is mokey on my back.

(This is my first try in English. hehehe :oops: )
 
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Wow, I can't judge whether it's perfect. But I have to say English poems are pretty different from Chinese ones.
You're really pround of being a poet, ain't you?
We seldom write poems now because those're kinda out of reality.

Btw, what means "swim you", Ron poet?
 

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blacknomi said:
Ron, this is my first time visiting you guys' poems. WOW, you are fantastic!
And Beeuurkes and sanny, you are great!
<clapping>


I can't think of any off the top of my head,
I guess there is mokey on my back.

(This is my first try in English. hehehe :oops: )

There's a monkey on your back?
Better get rid of that monkey, Jack! :)

I have a few more in this section (Poetry & Writing). Feel free to browse.

:)
 

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eric2004 said:
Wow, I can't judge whether it's perfect. But I have to say English poems are pretty different from Chinese ones.
You're really pround of being a poet, ain't you?
We seldom write poems now because those're kinda out of reality.

Btw, what means "swim you", Ron poet?

Poems are a different kind of reality. Or a different way of looking at things.

The swim is a massage stroke. Chinese do massage, don't they? In fact, the Chinese invented massage, didn't they?

:)
 
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