[Grammar] Parallel structure(Regular physical activity helps to not only control your weight)

Status
Not open for further replies.

ambitious-girl

Senior Member
Joined
Apr 29, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Persian
Home Country
Iran
Current Location
Iran
Do this sentence use the parallel structure correctly?

Regular physical activity helps to not only control your weight but (also) take your mind off work and any worries.

And, is not the sentence bellow parallel?
Regular physical activity not only helps to control your weight but it (also) take your mind off work and any worries.
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
The second is grammatically incorrect because the second half uses "it also take". That's not the correct verb form.
 

ambitious-girl

Senior Member
Joined
Apr 29, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Persian
Home Country
Iran
Current Location
Iran
The second is grammatically incorrect because the second half uses "it also take". That's not the correct verb form.
So the first one is correct. I also have made change as follow:
Regular physical activity not only helps to control your weight but it (also) takes your mind off work and any worries.
 
Last edited:

teechar

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Feb 18, 2015
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
Iraq
Current Location
Iraq
That's better.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top