Party Invitation

[rmsh16]

Hi, (pl. alter the grammatical changes and suggest other way of communicating a message)


Below message received by our sister concern. The same need to be circulated with in our organisation to the attention of HOD. Here is my note (in blue colour).


[FONT=&quot]Dear All,[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Received an invitation from SNT regarding a party at EVOMA on 5.4.08 at 7.30 pm. Please confirm your participation by 5 pm today, which enable me to inform the no. of employees from our organisation to the party. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Thanks[/FONT]

Greetings,

We are glad to inform, that SNT management has announced to host an employee get-together party. In this regard, we welcome your good self and PNT HOD employees for the held meet for 5th April, 2008, Saturday @ 7.30 pm at the venue stated below.

EVOMA
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Bangalore


Welcome All !!!!!!!!!!!

 

[David L.]

Dear All,

Received an invitation from SNT regarding a party at EVOMA on 5.4.08 at 7.30 pm. Please confirm your participation by 5 pm today, which enables me to provide numbers/the number from our organization attending.

Thanks

Greetings,

We are pleased to inform, that SNT management has announced hosting an employee get-together party. In this regard, we welcome your good self and PNT HOD employees to this gathering on 5th April, 2008, Saturday @ 7.30 pm at the venue stated below.