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englishhobby

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Does this sentence sound natural? (It's from a course book I'm editing that hasn't been published yet.)
It's a great way to meet Australians and other people from diverse backgrounds, to promote cultural exchange (corrected) and experience a different way of life.
 
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I would remove "other" and change the last part of the sentence

It's a great way to meet Australians and people from diverse backgrounds, as well as promoting cultural exchange and experiencing a different way of life.
 

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I would remove "other" and change the last part of the sentence

It's a great way to meet Australians and people from diverse backgrounds, as well as promoting cultural exchange and experiencing a different way of life.

Wouldn't it be better to be consistent to follow the infinitive form of the verb in the second part of the sentence?

It's a great way to meet Australians and people from diverse backgrounds, as well as to promote cultural exchange and to experience a different way of life.
 

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Wouldn't it be better to be consistent to follow the infinitive form of the verb in the second part of the sentence?

It's a great way to meet Australians and people from diverse backgrounds, as well as to promote cultural exchange and to experience a different way of life.

No, this is not better. "As well as" is a multi-word preposition. You don't use infinitives after prepositions. Gerunds are used here.

Also speaking as a native English speaker the sentence as I have written it flows better as you read or say the words.

However as I revisit the sentence I should omit the comma. It is unnecessary

It's a great way to meet Australians and people from diverse backgrounds as well as promoting cultural exchange and experiencing a different way of life.
 
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