[Grammar] peripheral education

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Ashiuhto

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Are the following sentences acceptable?

1. Through/By copious club activities and curriculums to prevent against cyber addiction.
2. Assist/Help students to be self-conscious of the influence of overusing Internet.
3. Carry out peripheral education, and build up the crisis management alert system of victims of cyber addiction.
 

Rover_KE

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These are not sentences. They each need a main verb.

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emsr2d2

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Also, we don't "prevent against" things. We "prevent" things from happening. We "guard against" things happening.
 
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