[General] Personally I feel that a good teacher is someone

newkeenlearner

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Is this sentence correct?

Personally I feel that a good teacher is someone a part of whose job involves introducing/producing new concepts to students.
 
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Rover_KE

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Delete 'producing'.
 

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Put a comma after "Personally" (or, preferably, remove it completely).
 
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