Peter, a businessman, had his driving licence taken

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Peter, a businessman, had his driving licence taken away because of drink-driving. He was angry at himself for committing such stupidity, and hired a personal driver to keep up with his business affairs.

 

[teechar]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Peter, a businessman, [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] lost his driving licence [STRIKE]taken away[/STRIKE] because of drink-driving. He was angry at himself for [STRIKE]committing[/STRIKE] doing such a stupid thing, [STRIKE]ity,[/STRIKE] and had to hire a personal driver to take him around. [STRIKE]keep up with his business affairs.[/STRIKE]

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[Matthew Wai]

http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/forfeit
I think 'forfeit' can be used in 'Peter, a businessman, had forfeited his driving licence.'