Peter always dresses formally

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Peter always dresses formally. Even when he goes to his local supermarket he wears a tailored jacket and a tie.

 

[Tarheel]

That's fine.

 

[Rover_KE]

... unless he's also wearing Bermuda shorts and flip flops.

 

[Bassim]

Rover_KE
Excuse me for asking again, but I didn't understand your post. Was my original sentence not correct?

 

[Matthew Wai]

If I understand correctly, it is a joke, and your sentence is correct.

 

[Tdol]

You could omit the indefinite article before tie, in BrE at least.

 

[GoesStation]

You could omit the indefinite article before tie, in BrE at least.

In AmE, too.

 

[Matthew Wai]

I would put a comma after the 'when' clause, a dependent clause.

 

[teechar]

I agree with Matthew. I would also put a comma after "supermarket" in that sentence.