Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?
Peter entered the nightclub and stood for a while, his prowling eyes searching for someone to spend the night with.
Peter entered the nightclub and stood for a while, his prowling eyes searching for someone to spend the night with.