Phil got lost in the mountains

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Phil got lost in the mountains after a few hours of hiking. He frantically fumbled for his mobile phone in his pockets, and panicked when it occurred to him he had left it in his room. He was saved a shepherd and his dogs after they heard his cries for help.
 
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He realized would be more natural than it occurred to him. A word is missing from the last sentence.
 

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I'm thinking that I missed "had."

"...after they had heard his cries for help."
 
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