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[peter123]

Hi there,

Please proofread the following sentences.

The park is very quiet at night so walking alone in the park is very dangerous.

thanks
pete

 

[David L.]

the sentence is grammatically correct.
However, you might consider '...park can be very dangerous' or '...park could be very dangerous'.

 

[Quire]

I agree with David. From a stylistic viewpoint, I would try to avoid the repetition of 'park', however.

As an example:

The park is very quiet at night so walking there alone can be very dangerous.

- Q