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peter123

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Hi there,

Please proofread the following sentences.

The park is very quiet at night so walking alone in the park is very dangerous.

thanks
pete
 

David L.

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the sentence is grammatically correct.
However, you might consider '...park can be very dangerous' or '...park could be very dangerous'.
 

Quire

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I agree with David. From a stylistic viewpoint, I would try to avoid the repetition of 'park', however.

As an example:

The park is very quiet at night so walking there alone can be very dangerous.

- Q
 
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