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Student tracking helps improve efficiency of learning. However, we mean here not to distrub individuals, but to encourage them in their studies.
It is important our students understand that every success has its price and effort.
We beleive that Homework Tracking System has a great contribution to our students’ success and its advantages are followings:
Parents are informed daily (via internet) and weekly(via weekly agenda) about our students’ positive or negative behaviors at school.
In order to take more healthy decision, we point out our students positive or negative behaviors according to all teachers’ opinions.

 

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Student tracking helps improve efficiency of learning. However, we mean here not to disturb(spelling) individuals, but to encourage them in their studies.
It is important for our students to understand that every success has its price and effort.
We beleive that the Homework Tracking System
includes a great contribution to our students’ success and its advantages are as follows:
Parents are informed daily (via internet) and weekly(via weekly agenda) about our students’ positive or negative behaviors at school.
In order to make a more informed decision, we point out our students positive or negative behaviors according to all teachers’ opinions.