please check my formal letter

[mostafaghoreishi]

from:
MOSTAFA GHOREISHI
FINAL YEAR B-PHARMACY
TO:
THE PRINCIPAL OF SRIPMS

Respected sir
As i need to stay in my country for treatment of my ear infection ,i would be appreciate of you if you would give a permission to my friend to fill the application letter for my hall ticket.
with the best of regards.
your sincerely
mostafa

 

[emsr2d2]

from:
MOSTAFA GHOREISHI
FINAL YEAR B-PHARMACY
TO:
THE PRINCIPAL OF SRIPMS

[STRIKE]Respected[/STRIKE] Dear Sir

As I need to [STRIKE]stay[/STRIKE] remain in my country for medical treatment [STRIKE]of my ear infection[/STRIKE], I would [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] appreciate it [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] [STRIKE] you[/STRIKE] if you would give [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] permission [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for my friend to fill in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] my application letter for [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] a hall ticket.

[STRIKE]with the best of regards. [/STRIKE]
Yours [STRIKE]sincerely[/STRIKE] faithfully

Mostafa

See above.