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Please Check my Resume

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mrbillybob

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Hi, I am applying for a job at a small local computer repair shop. I was wondering if there is any editing that you would recommend, Thanks.
[FONT=&quot]Matt Davidson[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]1 Newland Dr.
OpenSource, 00--00--00 E2E 100
Home Phone: 000-0000 · Email: enjoi_life@rogers.com[/FONT]​
[FONT=&quot]Career Objective[/FONT][FONT=&quot]: [/FONT][FONT=&quot]To obtain a position in fixing and working with computers. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Qualifications[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Built Systems and Installed Software[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Customer Service Experience [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Website Development[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Education[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Kennebecasis Valley High School (Grade 11 Student) 2004 – Present[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Quispamsis, New Brunswick[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Work Experience [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Telegraph Journal, Quispamsis June 2003 – Present[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]+ Carrier, Delivering newspapers to customers Monday through Saturday by 7:00 AM.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]+ Responsible for handling money and managing customer subscription accounts.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Skills[/FONT]
For the past 5 years I have built a number of computer systems for friends and family, and have installed the operating systems and related software. I enjoy working on computers and I am always keeping my skills current on the latest technologies.

[FONT=&quot]Interests[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Computers (Hardware, Fixing)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Designing Websites[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]References [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Janet McIntyre (Telegraph Journal Customer)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]000-0000 (H)[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Margie Ryan (Former Teacher)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]000-0000 (W)[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Mr. Stackhouse (Telegraph Journal Manager)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]000-0000 (W)[/FONT]
 

Anglika

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First observation I would make is that "Qualifications" is usually the courses you may have taken, such as a degree in computing, which give you a qualification in something. What you have under this heading should really appear under skills.
 
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