please check the opening part

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azkad

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Does it sound natural in English?
Please correct if necessary.

Good morning, dear fathers, leaders of our peaceful life, and dear mothers, the most courteous to people!
 

Route21

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Unfortunately, everything after "Good morning" sounds unnatural to me, as an NES (BrE) but not a teacher.

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R21

PS "Good morning, ladies and gentlemen" would be more natural.
 
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