Please check these two sentences

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It has business potential because it reaches mass of all class

The success of the brand depends on its instant connection with customers
 
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new2grammar said:
It has business potential because it reaches mass of all class

The success of the brand depends on its instant connection with customers
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It has business potential because it reaches a wide range of people from all classes of society. That's my suggestion.
 
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