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mahboobeh

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This is a short story. please the correct the sentences

This morning Lisa Miller was lucky when she was late and missed her bus.
Lisa sent a job application to A.C. company last month. They invited her for a job interview this morning at 11 am o'clock. when she was leaving of her hom, she remembered , she had left to take her purse.she had to go back. as she was hurrying to be on time she missed her bus. the bus had a serious accident in 15th st. and all the bus passaners died.
she stay alive becauseshe was 5 minutes late and missed her bus.
 

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This is a short story. Please correct the sentences.

This morning Lisa Miller was lucky when she was late and missed her bus.
Lisa sent a job application to [applied for a job with] A.C. company last month. They invited her for a job interview this morning at 11 am o'clock.[11.00 o'clock.] when she was leaving of her hom [As she left home/When she left home], she remembered she had left to take her purse.[forgotten her purse/left her purse behind/forgotten to take her purse]. She had to go back. as she was hurrying to be on time and so she missed her bus. The bus had a serious accident in 15th Street. and all the bus passengers died.
she stay alive becauseshe She is alive because she was 5 minutes late and missed her bus.
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