Please correct me, thanks

[Zoe2008]

We received your payment yesterday, thanks. However, it did not included payment for our invoice no. xxx; xxx; xxx; and xxx in total USD xxx, which were shipped April and overdue. Please make immediately payment and advise us of the settlement date ASAP

 

[Shakespeare's brother]

We received your payment yesterday, thank you. However, it did not include payment for our invoice no. xxx; xxx; xxx; and xxx in total USD xxx, shipped in April. This is now overdue. Please arrange an immediate payment and advise us of the settlement date ASAP

 

[Anglika]

We received your payment yesterday, thanks. However, it did not included payment for our invoices no. xxx, xxx; xxx, and xxx, totalling USD xxx (for items which were shipped in April), which are now overdue. Please make immediate payment and advise us of the settlement date ASAP

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[riverkid]

Please correct me, ...

When we 'correct sb', Zoe, it usually means to tell them that they did something wrong, as in socially.

She corrected her on her bad behavior.

Please correct my work/composition/sentences/etc.

sounds more natural.