Please correct me these senetence. thanks

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Zoe2008

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1. Further to the commitment between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and schedule with you. The details are as follows:
2. For the xxx goods, your figures are not match with our record, please double check and confirm by return.
3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory
 
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1. Further to the commitment between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and schedule with you. The details are as follows:
2. For the xxx goods, your figures are not match with our record, please double check and confirm by return.
3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory

are not match SHOULD BE do not match
 

Anglika

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1. Further to the commitment [agreement] between you and Macy, I would like to double confirm [to double check/to confirm] the outstanding quantity of ABC goods and the current schedule with you. The details are as follows:

2. For the xxx goods, your figures do not match our records. Please double check and confirm by return.

3. Please confirm the schedule for us to arrange inspection on 20 Feb at your factory.:up:
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