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[Zoe2008]

Considering the large quantity of ABC Domestics shipments, SGS was requested to split the large lot inspection into small lots to ensure the goods in best quality of our production. Therefore, we will arrange the inspection for maximum 10,000 pcs per each time in order to protect your company if the goods are rejected being the inspection and require to rework for large rework. This will be effective from April 29. Please note.

 

[Anglika]

Considering the large quantity of ABC Domestics shipments, SGS has been requested to split the large inspection lots into small lots to ensure the goods are of the best quality. Therefore, we will arrange the inspections to be for a maximum of 10,000 pcs per lot. This will ensure that if any goods are rejected at inspection, there will not be a need for large-scale reworking. This procedure will be effective from April 29. Please note.

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