Please correct my sentence
- Thread starter Zoe2008
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Jessica has approved (?) last Friday's audit schedule. I will keep Connie informed for her to follow up.
Did the audit schedule take place last Friday ?
Did J confirm it last Friday ?
Will you keep Connie updated ?
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Jessica has approved (?) last Friday's audit schedule. I will keep Connie informed for her to follow up.
Did the audit schedule take place last Friday ? No
Did J confirm it last Friday ? Yes
Will you keep Connie updated ? Yes
This is my revsion : Jessica has confirmed the audit schedule for our company last Friday. I will keep Connie posted for the update status
Is this better ? Please comment
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Last Friday Jessica confirmed the audit schedule for our company. I will keep Connie posted about the update status.
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