Please correct my sentence

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Zoe2008

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The shipment date should be May for PO xxx. Please find the revise in below highlighted in red. Sorry for my typing error.
 

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The shipment date should be May for PO xxx.
Please find the revision below, highlighted in red .
Sorry for my typing error.
 

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hi, is it possible to say "date of shipment"?
if so, would it be unusual?
thanks.
 
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