please correct my text

[jctgf]

I went to the botanic garden, indeed.
it's never been so nice to take some pictures over there.
the place was almost empty so that it was much better to capture good pictures.
there was only a bad thing: there were few flowers at this time.
all the flowers that had bloomed a few days ago have now simply vanished.
regards.

hi,
is this text ok?
thanks

 

[okkidokitokki]

I went to the botanic garden, indeed.
it's never been so nice to take some pictures over there.
the place was almost empty so that it was much better to capture good pictures.
there was only a bad thing: there were few flowers at this time.
all the flowers that had bloomed a few days ago have now simply vanished.
regards.



This is fine. I would say that there was only one bad thing instead of a bad thing but other than that this seems correct.

(not a teacher, I hope this helps)