please correct my text

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Zoe2008

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I have request you to send us the corrective report serval times, however, I did not receive it until today. Maybe there is a problem from your company server? Would you please send us today? We would appreciate if you may also cc your email to us instead of reply it to our customer directly.
 

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I have request you to send us the corrective report serval times, however, I did not receive it until today. Maybe there is a problem from your company server? Would you please send us today? We would appreciate if you may also cc your email to us instead of reply it to our customer directly.

I have requested you several times to send us the amended report. However, I have not received it until today. This might be due to problems with your company's server. Would you be able to send us the report today? We would appreciate it, if you could also send your e-mail to us instead of contacting our customer directly.
 

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Note: I supposed you used 'corrective report' to say that the report is expected to be amended. Otherwise, I overlooked 'corrective report' as a term.
 
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