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Annecy

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As we discussed, please arrange for payment of shortage in his basic salary
for the month of February 2008, and also please revise his basic salary which will effective February 01, 2008.


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As we discussed, please arrange for payment of shortage in his basic salary
for the month of February 2008, and also please revise his basic salary which will effective February 01, 2008.


Thank you for your help
As we discussed, please arrange for the payment of the shortage in his basic salary for the month of February 2008. Furthermore, please revise his basic salary effective from February 01, 2008.


That's what I think is correct. I'm not a teacher, though. So I'd advise you to wait for another response as well.

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Stilo

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As discussed, can you please arrange to pay the shortfall in his basic February salary. Also, please revise his basic salary, effective from 1st February 2008. Many thanks.

Hope this helps.
 
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