Please correct the following sentences

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Annecy

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As you requested, please find below the details of address for Mr. X in Malaysia.

Please book his ticket on 30 April 2008 and confirm me the same
 

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As you requested, please find below the details of the address for Mr. X in Malaysia.

Please book his ticket on 30 April 2008 and confirm me the same

Are you asking for the ticket to be booked on this date or for this date?
 

Annecy

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I want this ticket to be booked on 30 April 2008
 

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OK


Please book his ticket on 30 April 2008 and confirm to me when you have done so.
 

Annecy

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If I want this ticket to be booked for 15 April 2008, so can I write as follows.

Please book his ticket for 30 April 2008 and confirm to me the same

Thank you for kind kind help !
 

Anglika

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If I want this ticket to be booked for 15 April 2008, so can I write as follows.

Please book his ticket for 30 April 2008 and confirm to me the same

Thank you for kind kind help !

Can you check your dates! Which date is the ticket to be booked for?

The second part of the sentence: "confirm to me the same" is not good English.

If you want the person to confirm that they have booked this ticket for the date required, then"Confirm when you have done this" OR "Confirm to me that you have done this.
 
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