Please correct the following sentences

[JRD]

Duty Schedules should be followed accordingly.
The duty should be commenced at 5.55pm in the evening through to 7.50am the following day.
Main gate should be locked immediately when all staffs are left office.
Once the gate is closed in the evening, do not open the gate without any solid reasons.
In case any staff requests you to open the gate after the regular hours, you should ask them to contact Mr. Henry first.
If any staff required to do work in the day time on Saturday or Sunday or any public holidays, you should give them access.
No staff, staff’s family members, friends or guests are not allowed to come to office premises in the night time unless prior approval.
In case of any emergency, please call on 11xxxxx

 

[Anglika]

Duty Schedules should be followed accordingly.must be followed precisely.
The duty should be commenced at 5.55pm in the evening through to 7.50am the following day.Duty will commence at 5.55 pm and cease at 7.50 am the following day.
The main gate should be locked immediately when all staffs are left office. after the last member of staff has left the office.
Once the gate is closed in the evening, do not open it again without a good reason.
If any member of staff requests you to open the gate after the regular hours, you should instruct them to contact Mr. Henry first.
If any staff are required to do work in the daytime on Sunday or any public holidays, you should give them access.[Shouldn't they have evidence of approval for this?]
No member of staff, their family, friends or guests are allowed to come onto office premises at night unless prior approval has been granted.
In case of emergency, please call [name of person to call] on 11xxxxx

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