Please correct the passage for me

[Dawood Usmani]

Please correct the following passage for me if there are errors.
"Keeping in mind the cultural values and philosophy of education, the compatibility of the new generation with the current education systems and the ever expanding challenges of today's education, this series of "Young Artist" has specially been designed for the children of today in such a way that they feel more attraction towards Arts.
The series of "Young Artist" prepare today's children to compete the latest trends and to acquire latest technological awareness so that their mentality levels about designing increase and their concepts of colours and creativity also develop.Students thus evolved are more intelligent and beneficial than those who do not have a creativity touch and concept of them."
Best regards!
Dawood :lilangel:

 

[Anglika]

Please correct the following passage for me if there are errors.
"Keeping in mind the cultural values and philosophy of education, the compatibility of the new generation with the current education systems and the ever expanding challenges of today's education, this series of "Young Artist" has specially been designed for the children of today in such a way that they feel more attraction attracted towards Arts. the arts/Art.
The series of "Young Artist" prepare today's children to compete take in the latest trends and to acquire latest technological awareness awareness of the latest technology so that their mentality levels about designing increase ability to design is increased/increases and their concepts of colours and creativity also develop.Students thus evolved are more intelligent and beneficial and contribute more than those who do not have a creativity touch and concept of them.a concept of creativity and what can be done with it"
Best regards!
Dawood :lilangel:

 

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AnglikaRe: Please correct the passage for me
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Originally Posted by dawoodusmani
Please correct the following passage for me if there are errors.
"Keeping in mind the cultural values and philosophy of education, the compatibility of the new generation with the current education systems and the ever expanding challenges of today's education, this series of "Young Artist" has specially been designed for the children of today in such a way that they feel more attraction attracted towards Arts. the arts/Art.




:?: I. Is "Arts" wrong or just not good as "the arts/Art"?
II. If "Arts" is wrong, could you explain why?
Please.:roll:

 

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Any help?