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We need to provide 10% free spare packing with the goods into a container, but this is for new modle of 1st order only.
 
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We need to provide

10% free spare packing with the goods

Zoe - This is not clear. Do you need 10% more room for packing?

If so, "provide" should be "allow"

into a container.

This applies to the new model, 1st order only.
 
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