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She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work
 

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She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work

***** NOT A TEACHER *****

Good morning, Foodie:

Maybe something like:

During the school holidays, Mary was able to rest at home. Now that

school has resumed, she is once again busy with her teaching duties and

the usual household chores.

Have a nice day!
 

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She resumed work this week.school holidays were going on so ahe was at home..(person refered is a teacher).so she had a good rest otherwise she always is busy with houshold chores and her work

She went back to work this week. She's a teacher but it had been the school holidays so she'd been at home having a good rest. Normally, she's busy with household chores and work.

Notes: Capital letter at the start of each new sentence.
Space after each full stop.
Spelling of "referred" and "household".
 
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