Please correct to make it sound better

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TheShadow

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Hi,


"When it rains my mailbox gets wet and causing all my letters to get wet and running the ink of the letters"

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Gillnetter

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Hi,


"When it rains my mailbox gets wet and causing (causes) all my letters to get wet and running (Move to the end of the sentence and use the infinitive form) makes the ink of the letters"

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Gil
 

emsr2d2

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After we've fixed your sentence, I think you should get someone to fix your mailbox! ;-)
 
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