please give me suggestions for the sentences i have framed.

[lissi]

Hi all,
Hope everone's doing good.....Am being assigned a UK project and so i ll leaving to UK next month on ------ .Its a one year project... i wanted to share the pleasure with all of you ...
keep in touch..have a great day.

 

[Anglika]

Hi all,
Hope everone's doing good.....Am being assigned a UK project and so i llleaving to UK next month on ------ .Its a one year project... i wanted to share the pleasure with all of you ...
keep in touch..have a great day.

Do you want it made more formal? Or merely corrected?


I've highlighted glaring errors.