please help for a sentence

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Zoe2008

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We would like to describe / provide you the more details for the missing goods and extra / more good to avoid your mistake again.
 

mayita1usa

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We would like to describe / provide you the more details for the missing goods and extra / more good to avoid your mistake again.

I'm not sure if I understand exactly what you're trying to say, but let me suggest this and you can tell me if it fits with your meaning:

We would like to provide you with more details about the missing and extra goods, in order to help you avoid this mistake in the future.

[goods = things being bought or sold?]
 
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