Please help me correct this (My English is not improving)

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jomo27

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Dear Mr/Mrs,

It's been a while since the last time you sent me a message.
I have been very busy with assignments.
Is the internship program still open to me? Full-time 8 weeks long on July?
Waiting for your reply.


Regards,
XXX


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Gillnetter

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jomo27 said:
Dear Mr/Mrs,

It's been a while since the last time you sent me a message.
I have been very busy with assignments.
Is the internship program still open to me? Full-time 8 weeks long on July?
Waiting for your reply.


Regards,
XXX


IS THIS CORRECT?
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No. What do you mean by "Full-time 8 weeks long on July?"?
 
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