please help me fr this easy sentence

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Zoe2008

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We would like have your explantion, otherwise, we cannot waive this pentaly to you.
 

Trisia

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Hi.

I think you need to insert a "to" in there, as well.

We would like to have your explanation...

To be honest, I would have kept the comma after otherwise, though I don't suppose it's compulsory.

[not a teacher]
 

Stilo

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We would like have your explantion, otherwise, we cannot waive this pentaly to you.


You could also use

Please explain under what circumstance you wish the penalty to be waived.

Stilo
 
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