[General] Please help me the question~

[renee.jj]

Hi all,

I ask my colleague to provide me the list of key point in the article. He list 5 items for me but I can't find the relevant content in the document he listed. So I ask him whether he can point out for me. Is the following sentence correct or incorrect? Thank you for your help in advance.

" Hi xx,
Thank you for the information. I still have some questions and need your help with. Would you please help to point out the content that based on your lists? "

 

[teechar]

Hi all,

I asked my colleague to provide me [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a list of the key points in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] an article. He listed five items, [STRIKE]for me[/STRIKE] but I can't find the relevant content in the document he listed.

I don't understand the highlighted part. Do you mean "in the original article" instead?

So I want to ask him whether he can point it out for me. Is the following sentence correct or incorrect? Thank you for your help in advance.

 

[renee.jj]

I don't understand the highlighted part. Do you mean "in the original article" instead?

Yes! In the original article!

 

[teechar]

Hi Tony,
Thank you for the information. However, I can't find the related content in the original article. Would you please help point out the sections that your points are based on?