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sikwai

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My language teacher tell me that there are mistakes about word form in the sentences below , but I don't know how to correct in and why?

She enjoyed the action in talks with the group.

The script on the trophy included his name.

My language teacher tell me the that word form of "action" and "script" are wrong, but... I really don't know how should I correct it.
Please help me!! :)
 

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I'm not a teacher, which might be why I'm unsure what is wrong with the first sentence, but for the second, I would suggest:

The inscription on the trophy included his name.


With regard to the first one, it's possible that your teacher was looking for this: "She enjoyed the interaction in talks with the group."
 

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Can anyone help?

I want to listen more opinions from others else, thanks. :)
 
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stuartnz

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Can anyone help?

I want to listen more opinions from others, thanks. :)

While you're waiting for more replies, may I suggest a small correction to your question as quoted above? It would be more accurate to say, "Can anyone else help?"

(I'm not sure why you thanked my post, then removed the thanks, either)
 
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