Please Help

[Unregistered]

I Have To Write A Few Paragraphs About Myself Telling My Interests And Hobbies, Use The Simpler Pas, Presentperfect, And Presentperfect Progressif

I Include My Written Would You Please Tell Me If It 's Correct

Thanks You For Your Help

 

[Anglika]

Post what you have written and someone will advise you.