Please improve the sentence

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"Please!" "Please!"
Two swordsmen reversed the tip of their sword, holding the handle of it in right hand, putting left hand on the back of the right, and bowing toward each other.



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The above means:

"Please!" "Please!"
Two swordsmen reversed the tip of their sword, holding the handle of their sword in right hand, putting left hand on the back of the right hand, and bowing toward each other.

I am not sure the ellipses are proper.
 

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