Please modify my sentences

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Zoe2008

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1) I missed / did not includ the PO xxx in their last LC and shall be issued immediately.

2) We would favour with you at this time to submit a cargo receipt to bank for payment after shipment rather than / instead of 30% advance payment. Please confirm your acceptance for us proceed the LC to you as the shipment date is coming soon.
 
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Anglika

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1) I [STRIKE]missed / [/STRIKE]did not include the PO xxx in their last LC[STRIKE] and [/STRIKE]; it shall be issued immediately.

2) We would [STRIKE]favour with you[/STRIKE] prefer at this time to submit a cargo receipt to the bank for payment after shipment [STRIKE]rather than /[/STRIKE] instead of 30% advance payment. Please confirm your acceptance [STRIKE]for us proceed the LC to you[/STRIKE] as the shipment date is coming soon.
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